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re: Squirrel in the attic. UPDATE: Squirrel captured and I’m an awful human being

Posted on 1/21/25 at 9:42 pm to
Posted by deeprig9
Unincorporated Ozora
Member since Sep 2012
70171 posts
Posted on 1/21/25 at 9:42 pm to
Make that the first verse, not the bridge.

Also run the lyric ideas through different genres, rock, rap, etc, as a 3rd draft. Then fourth draft back into folk. Don't get set into a musical hook just yet. You've got something here. And don't forget the roux.
Posted by SquatchDawg
Cohutta Wilderness
Member since Sep 2012
16779 posts
Posted on 1/21/25 at 9:52 pm to
I’ll work on it
Posted by deeprig9
Unincorporated Ozora
Member since Sep 2012
70171 posts
Posted on 1/21/25 at 10:12 pm to
I'll let you use the buzzard, fireant, maggot line for a small, very small royalty.
Posted by SquatchDawg
Cohutta Wilderness
Member since Sep 2012
16779 posts
Posted on 1/21/25 at 10:19 pm to
This was a long ordeal so compressing it into something reasonable will be tough. I don’t want it too long but need to do it justice.

Hard to no have a tune in your head when doing it.
This post was edited on 1/21/25 at 10:21 pm
Posted by deeprig9
Unincorporated Ozora
Member since Sep 2012
70171 posts
Posted on 1/21/25 at 10:31 pm to
Use pen and paper. Writing lyrics out by hand is better.
Posted by lewis and herschel
Member since Nov 2009
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Posted on 1/22/25 at 7:20 am to
Posted by Violent Hip Swivel
Member since Aug 2023
5616 posts
Posted on 1/22/25 at 9:24 am to
The squirrel doesn't feel repentant, you can tell by the stupid smug look on its face. Deserves death.
Posted by retooc
Freeport, FL
Member since Sep 2012
7784 posts
Posted on 1/22/25 at 12:22 pm to
Congrats

Humans still the alpha killerz!
Posted by AlaCowboy
North Alabama
Member since Dec 2011
7353 posts
Posted on 1/22/25 at 10:42 pm to
quote:

Hard to no have a tune in your head when doing it.


Try Folsom Prison Blues, but change it to South Carolina Blues.

"I hear the river flowin'
I just drove cross the line.
That squirrel don't know what's comin'
I hope that he'll be fine."
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