re: “LSU, LSU, LSU, LSU, LSU”

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It’ll probably reek of cigarettes, beer, crawfish, and the sound of girls getting screwed by their cousins.

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I hope you realize that reek suggests an odor, not a sound..

Now if you had written “It’ll probably reek of cigarettes, beer, crawfish, and my mom’s rancid vagina after getting screwed over and over by her cousins and their german shepherds”, then that would have been acceptable.