Nosleep Series: Part 3 added

Well?

My bad guys, accidentally hit enter as soon as my subject got put in

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How long is this /nosleep// story gonna be?

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This part will wrap up pretty soon. I'm setting the stage for a series. I'm thinking of making it a stalker story, but I wanted some other creative ideas.

My current ending idea to this part is walking back by the collage and seeing my picture has been added.

ETA: I edited the OP, just making sure you've seen that

Thanks

1 criticism.

You're trying to paint a picture of this campus, and your walk, but you're giving me way too much detail to pay attention to. (If that makes sense). I found myself constantly rereading the previous paragraph to make sure I wasn't missing important plot points, which is exhausting for the reader, especially when I realize that I still don't know where you're taking me.

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Are you the one who wrote about the bathroom experience?



Yes, I am

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I enjoyed that as well

Here's one I found creepy:


A girl in her teens, is babysitting for a family in Nashville, The family is wealthy and has a very large house — you know the sort, with a ridiculous amount of rooms. Anyways, the parents are going out for a late dinner/movie. The father tells the babysitter that once the children are in bed she should go into this specific room (he doesn't really want her wandering around the house) and watch TV there.

The parents take off and soon she gets the kids into bed and goes to the room to watch TV. She tries watching TV, but she is disturbed by a clown statue in the corner of the room. She tries to ignore it for as long as possible, but it starts freaking her out so much that she can't handle it.

She resorts to calling the father and asks, "Hey, the kids are in bed, but is it okay if I switch rooms? This clown statue is really creeping me out."

The father says seriously, "Get the kids, go next door and call 911."

She asks, "What's going on?"

He responds, "Just go next door and once you call the police, call me back."

She gets the kids, goes next door, and calls the police. When the police are on the way, she calls the father back and asks, "So, really, what's going on?"

He responds, "We don't HAVE a clown statue." He then further explains that the children have been complaining about a clown watching them as they sleep. He and his wife had just blown it off, assuming that they were having nightmares.

The police arrive and apprehend the "clown," who turns out to be some homeless person dressed as a clown, who somehow got into the house and had been living there for several weeks. He would come into the kids' rooms at nights and watch them while they slept. As the house was so large, he was able to avoid detection, surviving off their food, etc. He had been in the TV room right before the babysitter right came in there. When she entered he didn't have enough time to hide, so he just froze in place and pretended to be a statue.

I've never posted there, but I've read a bunch of stories on the site.

An art building not built for scenery... what kind of fiction BS is this