Commissioned to make a FM radio ad for a friend.

A friend of mine has paid me $48 to record a 10-30 second radio ad for his business. An apparent sno-cone stand.

He didn't clue me on many details about the business except that it offers sno-cones. And they also rent out bicycles.

The business is called Chilly Willy's. I tried to imagine myself as a pedestrian driving home from work after a busy day at the office and suddenly I hear this commercial on the radio.

Here is my first attempt.

Attempt 1

EDIT:

I decided the Attempt 1 may be a little too brash to appeal to the entire family so I came up with a more kid-friendly "teaser" commercial.

Something to really get the kids kicking the back of their parents' seats and begging for some Chilly Willy sno-cones.

Attempt 2(For the kids)

EDIT:

I recorded two more attempts, hopefully we can move these commercials into some kind of rotation.

The first one is somewhat inspired by TBirdSpur2010

Attempt 3(Texas A&M)

The second one is another teaser commercial for the kids. The original one may have been a little too focused toward younger children, this one will better appeal toward the pre-teens and early teens.

I modeled it around Chester Cheetah, the mascot of the Cheetos.

Attempt 4(Chester the Cheeto)