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re: Monkey riot over takes city and leader apprehended

Posted on 3/28/24 at 5:09 pm to
Posted by cbree88
South Louisiana
Member since Feb 2010
5567 posts
Posted on 3/28/24 at 5:09 pm to
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Bad monkey walks down a high Thai street, Bad monkey rhythms in his bad monkey feet, Tied on his brow is a bad bandana, Hand on his hip holds a bad banana, Makes his way to meet all his bad monkey friends, Wrong turn, wrong street, down a bad dead end, Bristled fur as his neck feels a bad man's eyes, Fear as that bad monkey starts to realize, Bad men hide their faces but can't hide their guns, Bad monkey knows his bad monkeyin' days are done, He raise his bad banana but they shoot him down, Bad monkey spasms badly on the bad bad ground, His momma say that he was such a good monkey too, That he just fell in with a bad monkey crew, Bad man drag the bad monkey off by his tail, To the big bad bars of the bad monkey jail, It's a bad monkey world, they beg or steal or borrow, Be another bad monkey in his place tomorrow.


Why do people post dumb shite like this on here? Lol

Ain’t nobody got time to read all that and follow along with the rhymes and everything.
Posted by fr33manator
Baton Rouge
Member since Oct 2010
124701 posts
Posted on 3/28/24 at 8:56 pm to
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Ain’t nobody got time to read all that and follow along with the rhymes and everything.



Since it's too hard for you to comprehend I had AI analyze it for you.

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Here's a breakdown of the storytelling and rhythmic devices used in the poem "Apeshit":

Rhyme Scheme: The poem follows an AABB rhyme scheme in each quatrain, contributing to its rhythmic flow and making it catchy to recite or read aloud.

Alliteration: There are instances of alliteration throughout the poem, such as "Bad monkey walks down a high Thai street," "bad monkey rhythms," and "bad banana." This repetition of consonant sounds adds to the rhythm and creates a memorable pattern.

Repetition: The repetition of the word "bad" emphasizes the monkey's rebellious nature and the negative consequences of his actions. This repetition also contributes to the poem's rhythm and reinforces its themes.

Imagery: Vivid imagery is used to depict the monkey's surroundings and actions, such as the "bad bandana" tied on his brow, the "bad man's eyes" watching him, and the monkey "spasming on the bad bad ground." These visual descriptions enhance the storytelling and help the reader imagine the scene.

Narrative Structure: The poem follows a clear narrative structure, beginning with the monkey's initial actions and leading to the climax of his confrontation with the "bad men" and his eventual demise. This structure keeps the reader engaged and invested in the story's outcome.

Symbolism: The use of the monkey as a symbol allows for deeper interpretation of the poem's themes. The monkey's actions and fate can be seen as representing broader societal issues such as crime, punishment, and the cycle of violence.

Overall, these storytelling and rhythmic devices work together to create a compelling narrative that engages the reader and conveys the poem's themes effectively.
Posted by jscrims
Lost
Member since May 2008
3561 posts
Posted on 3/29/24 at 7:11 am to
This is the guy who gets off on OTers praising his “lyrics”.

If it works for him, let him be but I agree with you. It is kind of sad and pathetic but he seems like a decent dude despite having a body or two in his crawlspace and a suit made of skin.
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